Some of the feedback I received after uploading and sharing my first draft was that the animation over the artist looked effective however was lost amongst the artist white shirt and white background. So therefore with taking this feedback on board I will re film using a black backdrop which I will film on a green screen and then edit it in After Effects. Another point that was made was that I shouldn’t have the performer getting changed again (similar shots to the beginning) as it didn’t make sense until I have the reverse clips at the end. From this in my next draft I will use more underwater or surfing footage until the reverse clips. I will also edit some of the surfing footage in reverse when leading to the end to allow the viewer to get a sense that it all happened in one day. Which also helps to become clear by adding the sunrise and sunset at the beginning and end of the video.